Although the quality of life has improved over the past decades due to new technologies advances but the damage to the earth weight more. As far as i m concerned, human have created a damage in various ways like pollution, global warming and depletes the natural resources.
First of all, human with the increase in the advances in transportation and factories has created a lot of pollution. Driving the pump of waste tunnels into the river also creates a pollution in natural resources. For example, numbers of buses and trains cause the air and noise pollution which in return harms the nature. Though the factory has given a high standard to people and has reduced the unemployment rate but it has arisen the problem of pollution in environment. It has also caused global warming which is a critical problem that the nature is facing in today's time.
Additionally, due to the production of carbon dioxide in the nature has increased the global warming. Global warming is a harmful and most sensitive problem that the world is facing now. For example, global warming has increased the temperature of the earth and also caused the hole in the stratosphere which allow the harmful rays of sun to fall on earth. These harmful rays of sun cause skin problem to people and effects the photosynthesis rate of plants, if this problem of global warming does not reduce than it will create a huge debacle to nature.
Finally, the depletion of natural resources is an another problem the nature is facing by human. Resources like petrol, oil and minerals are degraded in nature. Excessive use of these resources has cause reduced the amount of these resources and are now in extinction rate. Cutting the tree, killing animals for the benefits of human has caused adverse effects on nature. For an instance, killing of elephant for ivory, meat and body parts. Also, other animals for furs has create disrupts in food chain of the nature.
In conclusion, human has damaged the earth for foods, Shelter, enjoyment and in comforting the basic needs. Earth has slowly deteriorated nature through its behavior and advances in technologies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...ar as i m concerned, human have created a damage in various ways like pollution, global ...
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
...ste tunnels into the river also creates a pollution in natural resources. For example, numb...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a problem' or 'another problem'.
Suggestion: a problem; another problem
..., the depletion of natural resources is an another problem the nature is facing by human. Resource...
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Line 4, column 474, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...parts. Also, other animals for furs has create disrupts in food chain of the nature. ...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... behavior and advances in technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94150417827 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62955301908 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487465181058 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3464147923 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3684210526 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137215124984 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456108376086 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475504876678 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890982786917 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413948977101 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.