having less friends for long time or more friend for short time
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Some people think having many friends would provide them with happiness. People think that if they surround them selves with a punch of people that will allow them to go through their obstacles in life. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that having two or three close friends is the best way for happiness in life. The basis of my opinion is social, educational, and personal.
From the social perspective, two or three friends are more than enough to live a happy life. First, when you are surrounded by two or three friends you would be able to communicate with them easily, you can talk to them even every day. If you have a problem in your work or you need another opinion, you will only have two choices to help you take the decision. It is less difficult for you to understand your friend’s personalities. However, if you have punch of friends you may struggle to deal with them. You have to understand each one’s personality. Many misunderstanding situations would happen during your life. It is true that two or three friends are the best to have a happy life.
Educationally, when I was in the college I had only two best friends. They were the best ever. We lived in the same apartment. We used to go to the college with each other. When one of us was disappointed the other two tried to encourage her to continue. We usually promote each other to study. I remembered the week before the tests begun; we used to do a schedule and divided the entire subject we had to study them through the week. One of us used to prepare us the place. For instance she organized the place and accommodated it to be suitable for us to study. The other one helped to prepare food. And the third one prepared all the study materials for us. Then we started to study when every thing was working well. Till now after 10 years of our graduation we still friends. You believe it or not those two friends are the best friends in my life. Two or three friends in our life is the best to have a happier life.
In conclusion, for the reason I state above, I recommend to have two or three best friends for a long time. It is better than having many friends for short time. Old is gold, the old friends will never replace by new one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is mo...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than th...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity to make many new friends easily. Some people think having many friends wo...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
...ess. People think that if they surround them selves with a punch of people that will allow ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial, educational, and personal. From the social perspective, two or thre...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the best to have a happy life. Educationally, when I was in the college...
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Line 10, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d to go to the college with each other. When one of us was disappointed the other tw...
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Line 10, column 776, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...ter 10 years of our graduation we still friends. You believe it or not those two friend...
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Line 10, column 927, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife is the best to have a happier life. In conclusion, for the reason I state ab...
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Line 13, column 48, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend having'.
Suggestion: recommend having
...lusion, for the reason I state above, I recommend to have two or three best friends for a long ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, then, third, well, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48115299335 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4988293777 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443458980044 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3082875374 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.15625 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.09375 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344719188714 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968689047656 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132622730434 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251116877612 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159777384636 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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