Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it?
In every country, there are different types of holidays or events which are celebrated by the country's people. If I will get the chance to create a new holiday, I would like to create "The health day". This holiday is already celebrating in some of the countries. There are the few ways how I would want to celebrate it
Firstly, this holiday will be very helpful for everyone's health. People would not be allowed to go to the malls, movie theatres or restaurants. They will start their day by jogging, running or other health-related activities. Smoking will be prohibited for that day. If people will do smoking that day, so they have to pay a lot of amount as a punishment. This day will be celebrated on the 1st day of every month and hence this will be a great start for the month.
Secondly, on this day people will not be allowed to use their vehicles like cars or bicycles. As a result, this day will be great for the environment also. In the present time, most of the people are depending on their vehicles, even for small distances, and create a lot of noise and air pollution in the environment. For example, one of my colleagues always goes to the store in his car, which is just behind his house. If there will be a day like 'The health day', then he would have to go to the store by his foot and this way we can reduce the environmental pollution.
Thirdly, people can reduce their stress that day. In the present days, all people are in a hurry due to the fast-paced time. Everyone wants to get more and more in their life and hence they do a lot of work in their day to day life. People do not get time to take relax for themselves. On this day, people will be able to take rest from their haste life. They can get the time for their families and can enjoy a small moment of life.
In conclusion, in this world, there are different kinds of people live. Everyone has their own choices. In today's time, people do not get time to take for themselves and hence it is good to celebrate a day like 'The health day'. This will help them to take relax from their busy lives and enjoy it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... This holiday is already celebrating in some of the countries. There are the few ways how I...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of amounts'.
Suggestion: a lot of amounts
...o smoking that day, so they have to pay a lot of amount as a punishment. This day will be celeb...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s day will be great for the environment also. In the present time, most of the peopl...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...In the present time, most of the people are depending on their vehicles, even for small dista...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34595959596 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38854584634 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429292929293 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9529819509 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7083333333 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152968278518 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604747653392 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057835530906 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119761293689 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100110963192 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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