As the two the most significant inventions in the 20st Century, Movies and Televisions had influenced people in various ways greatly. Some one may say that these videos proctucts destroyed the people's life as human beings have to accept whatever shows on the screen, hence the lost generation came up in the last 1960s. However, everything seems well in our society as we are evovling all the time. So I believe there are good influence in movies or televisions on people's behavior. As we have been through ages from the ancient times to date with lots of danger seemed to be while all to be proved useful to us. I will address my viewpoints thereinafter.
To begin with, viewing through the human history we learned a lot ( and woe for those who failed the lesson which guided us). There are many invetions which seemed to be dangerous for us. Firstly, the fire which we can use to cook or burn a house. While in ages, is is more useful in the kicthens of people while not in other places which killed or distroyed. Thus it is important for us to consider the use of every inventions. In this way, I choose to be optimistic as most of us in the peace time today. The Moives and televisons also have good benefit on us. we can learn knowledges and news form the televesion. I still remembered the day I was learning the sum of all the natural integer is -1/12 on a education channel which shocked me inside out. And the movies, as a movie-goer, taught me a lot,too. After watching the movie Fight Club, instead of abosorbing the violance aethetics between Edward Norton and Brad Pitt, I found some truh of life which I percived in this film, love and struggling for life. Even When I recalled the word in this move, "Slide....." which relaxed the hero, it also made me feel confortable. Thus the influence of the movie and the TV benefict my behavior a lot.
In addtion, due to the development of our technology, especially the booming of the Mobile Internet, the Movies and televisons seem to be less important for us. While we should know they are still there, on the screens of your PCs and Mobiles which went on influencing us. However, it is more important of people's attitude on these media. In my opinion, if we can make good use of them, all of us can benefit from the movies or televisons. Actually, with the observation of the human's behaivior, they do have the good influence on us. As the programs th TV provided us immediately with lots of attitude, we may consider things more deeply. I was found of watching News on TV instead of other medias as I can feel the attitude of the hosts which share thoughts with watchers. I can discover more informations behind the news from the words and appearance of the hosts. I'd like the documetaries which have the same effect of the news.but it would make me think more in every episode. Besides the sensation of the raped indian-girl event, I learned more background through the comment of the hosts. I would also correct my thoughts deeply as there are still lots of racism in the world which was not brodcasted, we should make rules to punish this crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57219251337 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65838457654 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1338870394 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138941097435 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043493370549 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653343930535 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109812019332 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388928943312 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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