We are not living in the world composed only by black and white. We cannot define something is denfinitly right or worng. Hitler was excellent at painting while his crime cannot be omitted by the artwork. Viewing the history of human-being, we can see that in the science area, progress mostly comes from challenging the past while also some significant archievements were made by the scientists who standing on the "giants' shoulders". While in some area like arts, the cerntain artist 's style is the first and last impression on them.
To begin with, the scientific research are often filled with controversies ,by which the scientific study is improving. Once a theory was established and then prospered, after a few years even several months, there would be another new theory challenge the previous one, thus the research makes progress in this way. So we need to empahsize the value from the oppsite side's view. In this way , we may discover the points we need to improve. There was a debate on whtether the Pluto was the ninth biggest planet in Solar system, after decades researching, the scientist found the previous calculation flaw, and the Pluto was obviated from the biggest planets list in Solar system, thenthforth , we are more clear of the pattern of our Solar system since this improvements.
Secondly, contrast points of view do not mean we must struggle against, on the other hand , it is an objective view to examine ourselves. We as humans usually cannot find the mistake we made by ourselves. From others' eyes, who can find the wrongs of the others' clearly, we may discover our shotcommings whether existing or not.This is the human nature, so we can use this nature more efficiently, or to say, the humble style will benefit ourselves, in that no one is perfect.
What's more ,in some area, people should stick on themselves as a kind of style. There are a lot of buildings in controversies ,for example. The CCTV building in China looks like a Levis' pants, while the maker of this building did not take the critics into grant ,becasuse art needs controversy, that’s why they value some time. Especially some modern mechanic art, you may just see a broken TV on trash which represent the industrialization.
In conclsuion, I agree with the topic partly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93298969072 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7975588494 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600515463918 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2979381108 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906717231114 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308105167944 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343476508592 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054889580366 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226233226087 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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