If food tastes good, it is probably bad for you. How far do you agree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
food has been associated with a healthy lifestyle from a very long time. the introduction of fast food has created a revolution in the food industry with ever-increasing consumers due to quick availability and good taste. these popular sustenance items are however generally unhealthy and thus has created a wrong association between health and taste in our minds. I strongly disagree with the belief that if"if food tastes good, it is probably ba for you". I have various reasons to bolster my point.
To begin with, my personal experience is a compelling example of this. being an amateur chef, a foodie and a fitness enthusiast i always try to find a ways to cook delicious food thats healthy. I often cook healthy meals for my friends and family. They have nothing but positive feedbacks in terms of taste . these low fat high prtein ean meals are really healhy and enjoyable.
Secondly, not all unhealthy food items taste good. There have been numerous cases of unappetizing food that is not pleasant to the palette. this totally goes agains the claim of tasty food being unhealthy.
Finally, while some people may argue about the relation between taste and the unhealthiness, I stand firm in my position. fats are more or less perceived as a tastier alternative than the other food groups thus making the it unhealthy. The modern fad of keto diet completely contradicts this claim. it consists of large portions of fat with minimal carbohydrates. these diets are proven to be beneficial in leading a healthy lifestyle and are thus the choice of various celebrities.thus i reinforce my claim taht scrumptous food can be healthy too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85994214297 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5486705348 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208804661584 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638132930009 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602231105702 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126253967392 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609278632961 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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