if universities are given financial support to develop researches, which one do you think would receive more benefits?
a) To predict weather more accurately
b) To clean rivers and ocean
c) To deal with outer space
nowadays, universities have various programs in which they invest in order to thrive different aspects of people's lives. IN this regard, there are always many arguments among senior university officials about which aspect is more crucial than others; weather forecast, river clean up program, search of outer space. Some university officials believe that universities should pay more attention to cleaning rivers and oceans which are the largest ecosystem on earth. However, while protecting seas from unpleasant situations such as pollution is ecologically important, I think university activities must essentially revolve around precise weather forecast. Because, exact weather prediction can help farmers to increase their productions. Also, it prevents major damage caused by natural disasters such as flood. I will elaborate on my reasons in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, agricultural is inherently sensitive to climate conditions. crop growth, or crop yield requires appropriate amounts of moisture, light and temperature. Detailed and accurate weather information can help farmers better understand and track the growth status to make informed decisions. Having access to this data can guide farmers in making significant and potentially costly decisions. Irrigation planning is a good example. If a farmer relies on a forecast for precipitation, that turns out to be accurate, he saves the cost of unnecessary irrigation. and by by having a good idea of the expected amount of rain over a period and irrigating just enough to allow crops to thrive, he will maximize his yield.
secondly, one of the initiatives for crisis management could be enhancement of the capability of long-range forecasts. For example, more specifically for flooding, water sensor networks and advanced weather radar stations could help forecast extreme weather, giving communities more time to prepare. so forecasts, early warning systems and effective national weather services play an essential role in protecting local communities from weather and climate impacts such as flood.
In conclusion, I strongly believe in the importance of weather forecast. By precise weather prediction, farmers could increase their harvest,and people could prepare themselves for extreme weather
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8005952381 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95624117599 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66369047619 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5449003747 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.578947368 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179812478254 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466511065049 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616789181087 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100316745255 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818161658812 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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