If you could choose to live in a place anywhere in the world, which of the following would be most important to you; Language, food or weather. Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
Food, Weather and language play an important role while choosing a place to live. Food is essential to survive, weather to embrace nature and language to communicate efficiently. If I could choose a place anywhere in the world, weather would be the most important to me.
Firstly, I am a nature lover. I always embraced the qualities of nature. I also learned so many things from nature like patience, punctuality, being happy and so on. All these would be possible if the weather of my place is nice. For instance, I have a habit of going for jog daily in the morning. The weather plays a key role in this because it should not rain or snow. A sunny day with optimal temperature is well suited for my jog. So, I can just go for my morning jog without any hassles and can start the day by saying good morning to sun, hello to little fresh flowers, listening to nature’s music by morning birds and have the fresh air from the greenery of the place. Thus, I can start my day as per my wish if the weather is quite comfortable.
Secondly, weather also plays a key role in the time of travel. I always love to explore the city I live in by visiting new cafes, historical monuments and temples and any exciting pubs. I can visit all these places in my car if the weather is nice. For example, I had done my internship in Delhi, a state in India. It has usually high temperatures. One weekend, I went to visit Taj Mahal which would take a couple of hours from Delhi along with my friends. We started in the morning and able to reach by 10 A.M. The day’s weather is so hot. Though we started early in the morning, I felt like I was in the middle of the sun due to the temperature. As a result, I just covered myself with my stole and just seen Taj Mahal for 5 minutes though it is one of the wonders of the world. I was so impatient that day and disappointed as I was not able to enjoy the trip due to the bad weather.
To conclude, weather is more important to me than food and language because I know cooking and can prepare dishes on my own. I can learn the language of the city if I try to speak. But weather is not in my hands. It all depends on the nature and location of the place. So, I choose weather for me being a nature lover and avid traveler.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to weather'
Suggestion: to weather
...and location of the place. So, I choose weather for me being a nature lover and avid tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20689655172 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44598781434 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480459770115 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0707158284 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7777777778 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07407407407 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175003231325 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579843320566 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918518094168 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154840020309 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122826495053 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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