If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? why? Use specific answer and details to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that time and place which we spent with our closed ones is always a memorable one. Similarly, I too have many such memories which I will cherish for the lifetime. In the given scenario, it is said that if i had a chance to go back to the time which one would I choose. Meanwhile, surely if by any means I could travel to the past then I would love to go back in the year 2010. I choose this time period for several reasons which I will explore inthe subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, there has been always my family in priority and I feel I am nothing without them. Back in 2010, me and my family went to a trip to singapore. This trip is one of my most unforgottable trip of my life not because it was my international visit but it bacame a last vacation with my father. After few years, I lost my dad in an accident. In addition, the happiness utterly eroded from our life since then. Nothing feels the same without my superhero. Therefore, I definitely would go back in that time where I can again spend my time with my whole family since nothing can beat and replace the unconditional love of them.
Secondly, since this was my first abroad trip and especially with my family, I was so excited for adventure. Similarly, my father he used to push me to give a try to exotic things be it visiting new places, trying some new cuisine, pursue new information and so on. So, when we were in singapore we explored new places, local food, learn new culture etc. To cite an example I have never seen ship before I reached singapore. We not only seen ship but also travel in it. It was such an elated moment for me. Most importanly, the time I got to expend with my parents was phenomenol which I never get a chance to do the same again in future. Hence, the reason I prefer to visit the time a decade ago is merely because of my father.
As we can see, time that we spent with our loved ones is always a special one. However, in my case if I had a time machine and could travel back to my previous time then I would certainly opt to spend time with my father. He was a gem for me and I really miss all the moment I had with him nevertheless singapore have different sort of attachment with lots of personal as well as educational memories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prefer to visit the time a decade ago is merely because of my father. As we can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i feel, in addition, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21889400922 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43702238985 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486175115207 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2920341398 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6086956522 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47826086957 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11554956104 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371709410678 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560718013201 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816899758107 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445347010001 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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