If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
There are numerous subjects in which I am interested. However, if I am compelled to choose only one subject it would definitely be data science. Data science is an emerging field which finds its applications in numerious fields ranging from engineering, business to medical fields.
Every year about 80 million people lose their lives in the car accident across the globe. However, using data science it is possible to reduce this colossal number of deaths. By Using machine learning algorithms, we can incoprate microprocessors and micro-controllers into cars which would guide the driver and thereby reduce the chances of accidents. Furthermore, many electric motor companies like Tesla have already these implemented these machine learning algorithms in their cars due to these vehicles are able to drive themeselves independently requiring very little human intervention.
Also, data science is playing pivotal role in medical field. It is possible to apply the concepts of data science in building an autonomous robots which are capable of perfoming complicated surgeries. IBM has already developed such a computer which is capable of detecting eye blindness at very early stage. Thus, it would be possible to prevent eye blindness if the problem is identified at an early stage and rectified using appropiate remedies. Application of data science can also be extended to solve other medical problems such as determing the chances of heart attack and accordingly warning the patient for the same.
Data science can provide impetus in solving complicated mathematics problems quickly which would otherwise have taken couple of years if it were solved manually by humans. For example, NASA is already using science to develop self learning alogorithms which would solve complex mathematical problem by performing multiple iterations untill the desired the result is achieved. Thus the arduous task of carrying CFD simulations is reduced from few days to few hours.
As illustrated above, the scope of data science is very broad can be used in multiple aspects of life. Therefore, given an opportunity I would prefer to study data science.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'robot'?
Suggestion: robot
... data science in building an autonomous robots which are capable of perfoming complica...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 376, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ill the desired the result is achieved. Thus the arduous task of carrying CFD simula...
^^^^
Line 4, column 451, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...FD simulations is reduced from few days to few hours. As illustrated above, the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8824708218 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592261904762 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1000501431 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794934493674 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309171319264 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376671784216 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542452018175 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295461460438 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'robot'?
Suggestion: robot
... data science in building an autonomous robots which are capable of perfoming complica...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 376, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ill the desired the result is achieved. Thus the arduous task of carrying CFD simula...
^^^^
Line 4, column 451, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...FD simulations is reduced from few days to few hours. As illustrated above, the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8824708218 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592261904762 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1000501431 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794934493674 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309171319264 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376671784216 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542452018175 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295461460438 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.