If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?
1. Find a roommate to share a room
2. Do not buy the latest mobile phone, buy new technological devices less frequently
3. Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)
It is most commonly accepted that individuals try to reduce their living costs by employing different ways. Therefore, some people may hold the view that the best way is to find a roommate to share a room. However, others may suggest buying cheap foods and cook home. From my perspective, it is more reasonable to share a room with someone, and I will develop my viewpoint in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, sharing a room with someone can help to reduce the expenses since roommates can share most of the living costs with each other. Admittedly, people who live alone are under a lot of economics pressure because of the costs of food and bills. In fact, the presence of a roommate can reduce most of the mentioned costs. To be more specific, when we share a room with a roommate, we make the opportunity to buy cooking stuff and pay the bills together. Therefore, individuals would stand less economics pressure. As a personal example, I used to live alone when I was studying at college. I could not cook home three days a week because of the classes and lectures. So, I had to eat outside which cost me a lot. Fortunately, I found someone to share my room with. Since then we bought cooking stuff together and shared the costs with each other which helped us to save a lot of money.
Alongside the first reason elaborated above, people can reduce living costs by finding a roommate because people will not feel alone anymore. It is obvious that people who live lonely try to entertain themselves and avoid being solitary by going to theaters, clubs, and different parties which cost them a lot of money. Therefore, living with a roommate will help individuals to spend most of their free time and fill their lonely time with roommates. For instance, while I was studying at the college that I mentioned in the previous paragraph, I used to go to theaters or going to some fancy parties every weekend which made me waste a huge amount of money. But after finding a roommate, I was not lonely anymore, and we watched movies together at home. Besides, we had a lot in common to talk and discuss about that I did not go to those fancy parties because I was enjoying to be with my roommate.
In conclusion, by taking into accounts all the above reasons, sharing a room with a roommate helps us reduce our expenses. Because not only people share their living costs with their roommates but also they do not need to go to the parties or go to theaters most often to fill their lonely hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun economics is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...her. Therefore, individuals would stand less economics pressure. As a personal examp...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... most often to fill their lonely hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56444444444 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4915501645 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2661774007 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1765413701 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583193744144 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397137770343 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12655148425 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446753012828 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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