If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose?
In today's hectic world, there are vast majorities of items that represent and convey different massage to the whole country in the globe. Indeed, every country can display its culture or even custom and tradition in order to be well-known. However, in my country although variety of object show our history and culture, carpet is one of the most significant items, which play a dominant role in different realm. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
To commence, nowadays, crowds of country bend over backwards to introduce their culture and civilization through their history in different ways. My country is known as one of the greatest country in producing carpet especially handmade carpet. In fact, the artistic techniques used in this industry show our culture and civilization that every human being can be taken up with our carpet. In other word, creativity and specific design with various combination of colors appeal any sight. In addition, the design used in this industry can thoroughly represent the transformation of tradition generation by generation and not only can all people around the globe realize the purposes of the design but also can get inspiration in order to produce the same work. For example, last year I send a beautiful carpet in short size to the art exhibition in Netherlands. The massage that carpet was transferred all was about my culture and living condition of my ancestor, which caused hundreds of people think about it.
On the other hand, sending carpet to the exhibition will definitely patronize our economic situation. As a matter of fact, it contributes to the country to recover from recession. Beauty of the carpet and its quality can attract investors in order to invest in this territory. In addition, myriad of people can run a successful business and export different kinds of carpets especially handmade one's to the other countries. It is established beyond doubt that trade with all societies of the globe will bring many beneficial opportunities for my country. For example, one the most significant advantages this trade can brings is job opportunities that provide fertile ground for people to take advantage of this chance in their life. In this way, not only will people find a decent job but also boom the economy.
To wrap it up, there are different kind of items, which can represent my country, the most important one is handmade carpet. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that carpet will certainly show our culture and civilization and introduce our custom to the whole world. Additionally, it will help to our economic because due to its high quality and beauty many investors make an effort to invest in our country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...combination of colors appeal any sight. In addition, the design used in this indus...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... To wrap it up, there are different kind of items, which can represent my countr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in short', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268686868687 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.125252525253 0.158761421928 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0848484848485 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0383838383838 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0545454545455 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123232323232 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0242424242424 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79798865336 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343434343434 0.0309702414327 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0040404040404 0.00188951952338 214% => OK
Determiners: 0.0888888888889 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030303030303 0.0209618222197 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121212121212 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2754.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 452.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09292035398 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389380530973 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283185840708 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203539823009 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148230088496 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79798865336 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475663716814 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.3010936199 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5238095238 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1600367248 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 49.8423935946 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.90740740741 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117696616005 0.300154397459 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0892719185805 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.055714801617 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503870631106 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10656711762 0.151897553556 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604571880599 0.114077575197 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500056455855 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.536623944468 0.336927656856 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0670827541588 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104287629439 0.210909579961 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369829767343 0.0618886996521 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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