Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
It is always observed that there is a lot of excitement when people move out of their homes for careers and education. The enthusiasm to experience a new atmosphere is experienced by many. I feel a similar kind of zeal as I plan to go for a year long trip. I hope that the trip turns out to be a great experience but I also feel sad that I will leave my house for one complete year.
People essentially take clothing and personal care items essentially for such long term trips. Many of the people that leave their houses also take items which are close to their heart along with them. These items can vary for each individual. It can be a gift given by someone special, a favorite book or even a CD full of one's favorite music collection.
However, the item that I will take except from my personal care items will be a photograph of my family. I am sure I am going to miss my family which is of foremost importance in my life. My family is the pillar of my life. Every family member has encouraged me and shaped me for better. All the family members have loved me a lot. Although they have loved and pampered me, they have also corrected and disciplined me to be responsible. In the trip, when I will face challenges and obstacles, this photograph might make me feel stronger as I would remember their support and encouragement.
However exciting the trip to a new place may be, there are times when one misses his/her home. As they say, 'Home is where the heart is.." . I may get the opportunity to taste different variety of food in the new place but there will be times when I will yearn for my home food. My family members have always cared for me and we have had a very friendly atmosphere in our house. While in the trip if I feel homesick, this photograph will assure me that I have people who love me unconditionally and make me feel better.
Apart from the essential items for the trip, I will take something that I treasure. I will take a token of remembrance of people which are of paramount importance in my life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'apart from', 'i feel', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217391304348 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.169082125604 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.06038647343 0.0866891130778 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386473429952 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.118357487923 0.0685040099705 173% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.113526570048 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0289855072464 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68967280575 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0193236714976 0.0309702414327 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0024154589372 0.00188951952338 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0772946859903 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.036231884058 0.0209618222197 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.024154589372 0.0139019557991 174% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2069.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43044619423 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.220472440945 0.338922669872 65% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.167979002625 0.251872472559 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139107611549 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0997375328084 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68967280575 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477690288714 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7168674704 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3181818182 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.879852657 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0454545455 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 34.1160820806 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.1037037037 1.45489161554 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244301085264 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1258640961 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0931145873728 0.0752933317313 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466953601511 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0895705104074 0.151897553556 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893027623258 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507375118286 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267260245473 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125852088586 0.067059652881 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164866446934 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276256932974 0.0618886996521 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.