Imagine that you plan to
donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of
charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?
- An organization that provides food and housing to people in need
- An organization that gives people money to start their own small business
- An organization that provides medical care to people in need.
To be honest, I can’t see anything more important than food and house for human being. There are, of course, a variety types of things that may someone need help with, but the primitive need that lacking it would makes life almost impossible is food and house.
As we all read in history, even primitive human beings has always been looking for a safe place ,mostly caves, to spend nights at and waking up the next day to look for an animal to hunt or to find eatable fruits. These chiefly needs of human have not changed even after hundreds years. Deficiency in food or house makes life unretainable. In my point of view, a hungry person can not think of anything but to find something to eat and survive for another day. Therefore, no progress or improvement can’t be achieved in this type of life, and it would be only a cycle of survivals.
Besides, there already exists some organizations that helps new start ups in cost of having a little share in profits. Moreover, insurance companies can help people to provide their medicine; it’s kind of their duty. But there are no official companies to help people with food or house except for charities.
Last but not the least, those who have no money to buy or rent a room, frankly living at streets, are more in danger of being murdered or abused. Unfortunately, most of them have no relatives or friends to keep in touch with them or meet them regularly so these people practically have no one to look for them if they get lost and vanished all of a sudden. This always makes me sad and evoke my sympathy.
In conclusion my choice would be helping people with food and house cause these people receive the least support from any responsible organization; and helping them with these primitive needs may help them to live properly not simply just surviving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...he primitive need that lacking it would makes life almost impossible is food and hous...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...has always been looking for a safe place ,mostly caves, to spend nights at and wak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, frankly, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, except for, in conclusion, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62654320988 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44067509294 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9901777675 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168385797006 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581224136442 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427754006996 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101372656195 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406509982366 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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