Independence or Not
"Independence is happiness," Susan B. Anthony, a distinguished American social reformer and women's rights activist, once said. Independence can be alluring since they have heard enough of their parents' chatter and do not want to let their parents control them anymore. However, age does not mean that people are independent and can live on their own. It is imprudent to live on their own because they still need parental help.
Living independently does not mean that young adults are independent, and living with parents does not mean being dependent. Ones who live with their parents can live independently by doing all they are required to do or getting their first job. Also, ones who live by themselves may not be self-sufficient. They may still let their parents assist them with problems instead of solving them alone. Parents may help them tenant a house for their children to live.
Teenagers may want to be an adult more quickly, so they can do anything they want without their parents' approval. Nevertheless, they may not realize that it has many liabilities that can harm people. One disadvantage is that it can cause disconnection. There is a danger when people are immersed in their world and fail to see how you have influenced people around them. Their action can hurt both others and themselves. In addition, it can cause blindness. Being independent takes work and luck. When people are independent, young adults may forget there are others when in a new world of their own. Then loneliness may follow. Young adults may live alone, travel alone, and work independently. Therefore, living alone may not be a wise choice. While living with families means the relationship between family members can be more substantial. Young adults can learn to be independent and have a steady salary for a longer time by asking their parents to share their experiences and arrange their lives when living on their own in the future.
However, opponents may rebut that independence can boost people's confidence. People are likely to solve problems on their own. Plus, young adults are possible to try out new things. After a while, it may build confidence and open their mind to knowledge. Remember that young adults have parents; as a result, they may ask for their parents' help and depend on them. Furthermore, some people may not try out new things; they may hang out till midnight or participate in other activities their parents forbid them.
To sum up, self-governing has benefits but costs a lot. Those who cannot do it at once shall walk step by step to reach the summit. Being independent depends on teenagers themselves; they should always remind themselves to do things they should do. After all, self-rule may look simple. Nevertheless, it is hard for all people to really do it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
'Independence is happiness,' Susan B. Anthony, a distinguished Amer...
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... living alone may not be a wise choice. While living with families means the relation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, after all, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 31.0 9.8082437276 316% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97234042553 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78829685762 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487234042553 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1782040735 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7352941176 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8235294118 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144091465241 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533461780655 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958997498672 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113969207925 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616436739743 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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