Internet form the government
As technology advanced, the internet made our life better and more convenient. People could utilize the internet to do various things. Therefore, in my opinion, letting every citizen access the internet is a thing that the government should be responsible for.
To begin with, since people need to pay for the internet, some people who couldn’t afford the price couldn’t enjoy the convenience of the internet. In addition, more and more basic things in daily life require the internet. For example, some hospitals might ask people to register on their website before they come to the doctor. Therefore, with help from the government, the such problem could be solved. Those people didn’t need to be worried that they couldn’t have the basic service and couldn’t enjoy the convenience.
Second, the internet can help people get rid of emergencies. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Once, I went on hiking in a mountain with my friends. Nonetheless, I was lost and couldn’t find my way back. Fortunately, there was still an internet signal in the mountain so I instantly sent a message to my friends. Eventually, my friends found me and we all arrived at the exit safely and sound. Accordingly, I strongly agreed that the government should offer the internet to all citizens so that people could prevent accidents.
Last but not least, nowadays, many people didn’t live with their parents or even live far from them because of work or studies. However, it’s important to keep in touch with your family members to let them know you are safe. Thereby, it’s time that the internet can be helpful. Take me as an example, when I was in college, I often use the internet to contact my parents who lived in a different city from my school. I would regularly send a message or even called them to let them know I’m doing well. As a result, if the government could provide the internet to everyone, there will be fewer worries among families since family members can easily contact each other.
To summarize, from what I’ve mentioned above, not only is the internet important but also brings lots of advantages to people so I believe the government should make sure that every people can enjoy such benefits.
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- TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task In recent years many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rience is a compelling example of this. Once, I went on hiking in a mountain with my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91578947368 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62445878869 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9763806077 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225359803129 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714110243745 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708294042419 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149975068144 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558639326522 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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