The internet means that people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
Do you agree or disagree?
The internet is one of the greatest inventions of the twentieth century. Thanks to modern technologies, you can find nearly everything there and explore the planet in detail without even leaving your bedroom. Billions of people were not allowed to travel abroad this year because of the threatening virus, so all of them spent their vacation at home with the internet. And, according to the experience of lots of people as well as my own practice, the internet, probably unexpectedly, turned out to be a fantastic service for learning the way people live in other countries.
Needless to say that nearly everybody on the Earth has access to the web, so the latter contains an enormous amount of information about every place on the planet. And the database becomes even fuller every day because anybody can publish whatever they want on the internet, so more and more pictures, books, paintings, and other great works of art become accessible there. Consequently, it becomes easier and easier to get information about even the furthest places in the world. For example, using data from the web, during the last month, I have learned a lot about living in different countries in Oceania. I do not think I would have ever gone there by myself, but the internet provided me with the ability to learn their culture, which appeared to be very interesting.
Even more, there are lots of news websites on the internet that also provide information about how people live abroad. It is always interesting to keep track of significant political and social events happening in adjacent, or probably even distant, countries. For example, all the world has recently been following a very internationally important event of presidential elections in the US. Definitely, it would be nearly impossible to get so many different points of view, so many various pieces of information on what was happening there without the internet.
But there is also a suggestion that the internet cannot provide you with precise information. Even though it has millions of gigabytes of data, it is impossible to convey emotions and feelings even through a video with the greatest possible quality. Probably it is true, but I am sure that the internet can teach you a lot about how people live abroad even without providing you with the feelings of native people. You do not necessarily need to perceive emotions to comprehend how people live.
To sum up, even though the internet has some disadvantages that are not yet eliminated by IT-giants, it is a great resource to get information about everything and, in particular, about how people live all over the world. So, it would be an impudent lie to disagree with the given statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, for example, in particular, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97136563877 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77049085074 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6045564216 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.789473684 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8947368421 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232009980072 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751007335614 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085018294023 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132661029199 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599842374207 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.