It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' job than to choose jobs that are very different form their parents' job.
In today’s world, job has a pivotal role in every aspects of our life. Unless one has a proper job, he or she can enjoy a successful life. As the dawn of humanity, young adults have been in a struggle about choosing a job which can pave the way to better life. People usually are categorized into two different groups. Some of them prefer to continue their parents’ job, while others choose a different one. I, for one, believe that it is more reasonable for children to choose their parents’ job for quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, by following parents’ job, reaching success is more probable. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that parents are so sensitive to their children’s future and make their bests to make a proper future by giving them invaluable advice. Needless to say that parents can make the best recommendation for their children regarding their career based on their own experiences. In fact, parents can teach their children what they should do, and what they should avoid. It stands to reason that following instructions given by parents can guarantee success for children. A brief review of history has indicated that people who have family business usually are wealthier than others.
Additionally, choosing parents jobs leads to more promotion opportunities. In fact, sometimes, the parents’ credit help children to be more respected, and this can give them a positive feelings by which the work place become more favorable which can lead to more promotion. In addition, the children become well-informed by their parents about the ways in which they can improve their performance. Statistically speaking, employees who promote usually have background knowledge in advance. For example, my uncle is a doctor, and his girl also choose the physician for her career, and by employing her father’s knowledge and advice, she become a well-known and skillful doctor in my city in an easier way in comparison with her colleagues.
Eventually, It is crystal clear that. It is time efficient to reach success if we choose our parents’ job. In fact, we are able to make an optimum decision if we know the consequences of each actions which have transmitted to us from our parents. Indeed, making decisions in a risky situations is so time-consuming which may need careful evaluation of every steps. However, if we know the every aspects of a job, we can have a best performance in a timely and appropriate fashion.
To draw the conclusion grounded on the above statements, I have penchant for choosing the parents’ job on the grounds that it can bring us more success, more career promotion, and time efficient performance. Accordingly, let’s not take pursuing our parents’ job for granted which can pave the way to successful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...the every aspects of a job, we can have a best performance in a timely and approp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch can pave the way to successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15466101695 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0720828459 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502118644068 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3021881717 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465656958713 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152292480638 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120136556371 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292785046461 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108007036646 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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