It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.

Essay topics:

It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.

Nowadays, i am live in modern world and i have my rules. I am disagree to follow my parent’s carrier and i prefer to select new opportunities (job opportunity). However, i have my life and it is my choose. For example, i will follow different way. I have different aims and i am living in modern world with new conditions. So, i prefer to follow my ways and rules. So, i will not follow my parents.

First, i have to follow my ways. Therefore, i will select my job opportunity and i will not follow the same job like my parents. For example, my parents they are doing business. But, i prefer to continue my studying and become a university lecturer this is my dreamy job. Unlike, my parents always tell me to follow our path. But, i am disagree with them. i like to select my carrier and i don’t like to continue business. Further, i will choose my job and i will follow my rules.

Second, i have another aims and my parents just thinking to business. I prefer to continue studying and become lecturer or start another job in World Bank as a senior manager. However, i am disagree with the statement that says, "it is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents jobs." i don’t like this statement. i like to choose my job and no one interfere on my select and they should show respect.

Third, todays i have different condition than my parents have in the past. Moreover, i am living in 21 century (the age of technology) and i have another idea about my carrier, Job opportunity. However, i am disagree with essay statement that says, "It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents jobs." i like to choose new job with new rules and i like to carve my path not to follow my parents.

To sum up, it is modern world or 21 century, the time of technology and i don’t like to follow my parent’s path. i like to choose my job by my selection without any interfere. However, i am disagree with the essay topic because i have my aims with different ways and another condition than my parents have. However, i prefer to choose my job by my choice not my parents choose.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4880952381 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63766112983 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.316666666667 0.524837075471 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.4314535353 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34615384615 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390668844319 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132228360194 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176635474156 0.0737576698707 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332012374283 0.150856017488 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209022784926 0.0645574589148 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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