It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. Agree or disagree?
Without any shadow of doubt, there exist some significant junctures in the everyone's life to achieve their goals, among which commencing and choosing a job has inevitable and crucial importance and without it leading to gratifying life is not feasible in today's competitive world. People pursue their desires and trends in finding a job according to their personality, responsibilities, study fields, and cultures socially acceptable in their countries, to name but a few. With this in mind, a controversy exists as to whether or not people should select their parents' job. While some argue that children should not follow their parents' interest in finding a job, others believe otherwise. As far as I am concerned, I subscribe to the latter group, three of which -that is- having difference in talents and skills, being independence, and communicate with various people are conspicuous reasons that are elaborated hereunder.
Although it may seem that choosing the parents' job can lead one to the brilliant achievements in the future life, with high probability it adversely affects one's modifying. Interest alongside attempts are considered as key elements to reaching the zenith of success and improvements. In this regard, those of people who are affected from their parents in selecting a job, neglect their intrinsic talents and abilities in paving the way based on their desires and ideals. On the other hand, majority psychologists point out the fact that lack of any consideration to the interest and skills causes irrecoverable conditions in upcoming events and create a detriment character in facing with hardships.
some people claim that through the following the parents' job plan, young adults can use their experiences for the future life. Even though it is a true assessment, it does not usually occur in real life, inasmuch as the trends and inclinations of people play a great role to get progress in the life. Finding a job based on one's interest leads a person to important decisions making and get responsibility in the life. Accordingly, being independence brings a self-confidence so that people can pursue their objectives. In addition, statistics prove that the main group of people who cannot be independence encounter with difficult behavioral problems, which has its root in not enjoying their skills and abilities based on their powers.
Last but not least, development and advance in information technology (IT) open new job positions into the young adults and extend their horizons. Although it can be heard that technology has separated family members from each other, it has an important importance in creating communication and social relations with other different humans as well as companies. In this conditions, people have great deal of options and facilities to get proper scheduling for their prosperity in the future life. In contrast, cooperation with the parents not only limits our goals but also make a significant dependence to them. Therefore, in modern's world, a person can reach to the development the desires if adapt the situation the facilities wisely.
To sum up, the accuracy of assessment varies from person to person based on their characteristics. Nevertheless, due to having independence personality, leading ahead the life according to the personal talents, and bringing the high level of development, choosing a different job without any interference of parents in the procedure can be obviously helpful. Therefore, one should have a better understanding of his or her capabilities and then decide about the job positions in the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 526, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...With this in mind, a controversy exists as to whether or not people should select their parents&apos...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... character in facing with hardships. some people claim that through the following...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...fferent humans as well as companies. In this conditions, people have great deal of o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'as well as', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259818731118 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.132930513595 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0845921450151 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392749244713 0.046263068375 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0453172205438 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125377643505 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0543806646526 0.0351676179071 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16808882206 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0271903323263 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00302114803625 0.00188951952338 160% => OK
Determiners: 0.0906344410876 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166163141994 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00906344410876 0.0139019557991 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3658.0 2387.08602151 153% => OK
No of words: 571.0 408.028673835 140% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40630472855 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408056042032 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30122591944 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.238178633975 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.189141856392 0.112833075102 168% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16808882206 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511383537653 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 63.1969601221 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9545454545 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.05859013 48.84282405 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.272727273 120.699889404 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9545454545 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 0.644075263715 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 56.0771373985 45.7405998639 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.02083333333 1.45489161554 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18862370236 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0940658797118 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0497730878339 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5335187716 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0999631841377 0.151897553556 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900429346027 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363468601227 0.0781384742642 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.486475350109 0.336927656856 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0461418591237 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145450380339 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351357990909 0.0618886996521 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30