It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
In the present society it has a tremendous importance for one’s future were he or she is coming from. I am not talking here about material aspect of life but about the roots and someone’s inheritance from social point of view. In my opinion, is better for the children to grow up in the country side.
To begin with, the life in the country side implies, almost with no doubt, a healthier life style: starting with the environment and finishing with the daily food. For example, at country side the people produce and grow their own food. My grandmother lives in a small vil...
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In the present society it has a tremendous importance for one’s future were he or she is coming from.
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I believe that will be beneficial for the children’s development to grow up in a country side.
I believe that it will be beneficial for the children’s development to grow up in a country side.
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 498 350
No. of Characters: 2236 1500
No. of Different Words: 254 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.724 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.49 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.556 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.652 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.837 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.478 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.475 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5