It is better to have broad knowledge in many academic subjects than specialized in one specific subject?
Although, there are a growing consensus that having a broad knowledge of many academic subject is better for the professional livehood. However, there is a solid body of opinion that casts down heavily on these beliefs. Form personal intends, I believe that it better to specialize in one specific subject, given that it gives us the chance to accumulate knowledge, make accomplishment, and success in one career.
Firstly, people who want their life based on their education, they should earn deep knowledge and skillfullness in a specific academic major. For example, students in the universities should focus on one subject in wich they are interested, in order to succes and earn profound understanding. People who concentrate in one specific subject, they can not only accumulate knowledge, but also gain experience. Therefore, people could have a good career and suitable social status in the future.
Next, couple with accumulate knowledge, make accomplishments is a second reason for concentrating in one academic subject. Provided that people want to earn a scientific honor or invent, they should focus on studying one subject to achieve it. For example, the Egyptian scientist Ahmad Zewail, he specialized in chemical and phsical technology, and was awarded a Nobel Prize for his work in femtochemistery. Consequently, people who concentrate in one academic major can make accomplisments.
Finally, the world has become so competitive, given that doing well in jobs and moving forward is more important now than ever.A survey done a big company in California found that the employees who focus in their field and keep taking courses and reading the new research easily promote and get higher salaries. As a result, set a goal in one specific field is significant to achieve career success.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt specialize in one academic major has great benefits for the professional livehood. It is suggested that shcools design an educational program to ensure students follow the fields they wil be interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33639143731 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.067352986 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581039755352 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8135785948 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372324751091 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118606844724 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109330154863 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195302194235 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136416174862 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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