It is better to have lots of different friends than it is to have just a few friends.
“Friend in need is friend indeed”. This proverb is very useful to our life. Off course, there are many friends in anyone’s life but all friends are not helpful and supportive toward us. Among many friends, only few are in our happy and sorrow. It is not compulsory to be helped and supported by every friends but in my opinion having many friends in life is better than the to have few one. Here I am going to elaborate my points in my essay.
First of all, sometime we fall in such problems when we may not be able to have help friend if we have few friends. Few friends with us may be in their own work but if we had more friends at least one of them might have helped us. For example, When we went to trip in eastern Nepal from Kathmandu in college level, we had got vehicle problems in between the forest and we were not supported by any vehicle passing by. But, due to my friendship with many collage brother from senior to junior level we get support by calling those senior brother whose house was somehow nearer to the way. That event makes me more aware about importance of having more friends and their relationship.
Furthermore, it is great chance of more dialogue and interaction with many friends so it would be beneficial in our study. We can get idea about our solution and assimilates the ideas to get right decision. Discussion in group help to increases our motivation and do work better. For example, before the exam, many students gather in my home and discussed in problems so we always do better in hard subject.
Moreover, more friends in any problems is very helpful to get decision and reduce the pressure of plan and responsibility. We can share our responsibility so it increase our confident level. For instance, a campaign for collection of fond for flood victim last year did not go smoothly as we were few in numbers but while it was supported by all friend we collect sufficient amount.
In nut shell, friend are always needed in our life, from sorrow to happy . having many friend is very better than having few friends in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57180851064 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52845676215 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51329787234 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5794515444 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.95 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271396060854 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103123697979 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137658607886 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185288116191 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119801814266 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.