It is better to have lots of friends than it is to have just a few friends. Do you agree or disagree?
Friends are the integral part of our life. They make our life meaningful. In the given scenario, whether it is good to have many pals or just a few of them is a debatable issue. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that having less friends but the trustworthy ones are far more better than to have tons of friends. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, communication become so easy with few friends. To be more precise, if there is large group then it will be difficult to communicate to each of them. And as a result, misunderstanding take place. For instance. during my school days, I used to have lots of friend and it was quiet hard to make any plan and to satisfy all of them. In addition, by this what I realize was many different people is equals to varities of opinion. We could not end up to one decision. Therefore, having lots of friends is like a headache which won’t be the case with few friends.
Next, friends are like our family. They know every single thing of us be it good or bad and always get ready to assist us in any situation since there are only few of them. However, this is only the case if we have small group of friends. In other word, if there are many friends, they don’t feel like our own as there will be more comparision than the sense of helpfulness. I have witnessed this in my own personal life. Again back in my school days, If somebody needs help, then no one would come forward to help because they had the feeling that why me? and why not she? This eventually did have very bad impact in our friendship.
All things considered, no one can guarantee the close friendship in large group as they are not praiseworthy. And being friends with few of people is always welcoming because they are always by our side no matter whatever the situation is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nwhile, I am of the opinion that having less friends but the trustworthy ones are fa...
^^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...riends but the trustworthy ones are far more better than to have tons of friends. I feel th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...understanding take place. For instance. during my school days, I used to have lots of...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tanding take place. For instance. during my school days, I used to have lots of f...
^^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of friends'.
Suggestion: lots of friends
... during my school days, I used to have lots of friend and it was quiet hard to make any plan ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t was quiet hard to make any plan and to satisfy all of them. In addition, by thi...
^^
Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...In addition, by this what I realize was many different people is equals to varities of opinion...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...single thing of us be it good or bad and always get ready to assist us in any sit...
^^
Line 6, column 559, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...cause they had the feeling that why me? and why not she? This eventually did have v...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46511627907 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48942463069 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8706752856 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8181818182 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255723809164 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071552310019 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888172102207 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167977518019 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842667490392 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nwhile, I am of the opinion that having less friends but the trustworthy ones are fa...
^^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...riends but the trustworthy ones are far more better than to have tons of friends. I feel th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...understanding take place. For instance. during my school days, I used to have lots of...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tanding take place. For instance. during my school days, I used to have lots of f...
^^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of friends'.
Suggestion: lots of friends
... during my school days, I used to have lots of friend and it was quiet hard to make any plan ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t was quiet hard to make any plan and to satisfy all of them. In addition, by thi...
^^
Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...In addition, by this what I realize was many different people is equals to varities of opinion...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...single thing of us be it good or bad and always get ready to assist us in any sit...
^^
Line 6, column 559, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...cause they had the feeling that why me? and why not she? This eventually did have v...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46511627907 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48942463069 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8706752856 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8181818182 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255723809164 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071552310019 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888172102207 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167977518019 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842667490392 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.