It is better to spend the money of rich persons for which of charity organizations?
Health care
Provide food
Start the small business?
Since the beginning of time, human beings have always strived to improve their living standard and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, the health has played a pivotal role in all societies. one of the most important human beings problems was sickness and disease. Even in our modern society with technological progress and all humans’ discoveries in the field of science we still suffer illness and undiscovered sickness. The most important thing ever is health and today we know mental health is as important as body health. I believe that all people have to care about their and other heaths. Thus I believe the money should spend on health care.
First and foremost point that I would like to bring here is that today people suffer too many things, air and environment pollutions, populated cities, internet addicts, stress and…
we have to try living healthy as much as we can but we don’t, because we obsessed with our modern lives. today no one use satires, no one eats and drink healthy and at least half of teenagers are internet addicted. The governments should spend more attention and money to their citizen’s body and soul health. because I believe that healthy man can be more helpful for himself and his family and society. The health care is the most important issue in every filed. Recent research has shown that today humans suffer more from mental illness. In my opinion, this is more dangerous than body problems and the treatment are more difficult and in some cases impossible.
The second point is if one is sick he wants treatment and treatments are expensive. In some case, the treatments are very expensive and of course necessary. money is a prerequisite for health. A sick person who doesn’t have money difficulty will have no stress and will recover sooner. For illustrate, cancer and MS are the example of the worse body illness they are very hard and painful and also expensive. The mental illnesses are very expensive than the body illness and their treatment is uncertain so if a patient doesn’t have financial support, he will not receive treatment.
To wrap it up and make a long story short, I believe all of the patient without any conditions must have financial support because they have lot of problems to think about and it’s not fair that money becomes a problem. Sadly, money is the treatment key and patients need treatments for being alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, thus, at least, of course, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00970873786 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361224909 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507281553398 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6243232025 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110188436329 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474120366123 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692197747691 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508598623398 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385389536157 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.