Knowledge is one of the fundamental needs for everyone. There are many perspectives about the source of the knowledge, I will clarify that in the body of this essay.
Initially, In many ways experiences are very essential on our lives. However, without experiences we cannot know the pros and cons for many things. For instance, there are many professions we cannot practice if we just focus in the theoretical concept without the practical side. By way of illustration, been a doctor by reading books or been an accountant without applied the financial standers cannot let you excel and master your profession, In the reality, we learn many things as how to be a confident and how to be more independent in our live also how to make friends and solve problems only by experiences. Knowledge gained from Experiences without monopolize in contrary with books the best books are unreachable or cost more. Experiences come from the real live and we don't have to spend more time in reading or learning much knowledge we don't need it on the real live.
Moreover, experiences is very essential to obtain knowledge. In the other hand, books are very reliable and significant source to gain knowledge. How not, all the experiences from the ancient period moved to us through books. Such, the practical time for many cultures in the past and the medical therapy and descriptions. Also, many theories that scientist discovered long time ago have been recorded in books and play a big role in the enormous development today. There are many aspect books can be enough to cover the need of the knowledge such as literature and poetry.
In third place, gain knowledge from books can be forgotten with days. For instance, I cannot remember the books that I have studied in the college before three years ago. In contrast, I still remember a lot of experiences with my colleagues.
In conclusion, gained knowledge from books and experiences cannot be separated in my opinion for many reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, third, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94910179641 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82086936156 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511976047904 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2475802395 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217564909749 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801858410977 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731706955199 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138138232323 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460710773687 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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