It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
The communinity I live in has two high schools, which relevant to number of students, residuing the town. I personally oppose the plan of building a new high school in my community. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
One of the reasons is that the community stugles of lack of green spaces. There are amyriad of families with small kind, who need places to spend time outside with their children. Spending money on developing green parks could solve this drawback. If the government of the town sponsors creating of parks instead of the new high school, it is likely to fasilitate to development of social connection between members of the community. For instance, mothers with kids will be able to meet new families in there and build the connection. Although schools undoubtedly brings kids together, parents also need a chance to gaing new friends, and the parks can performe this role. To that end, it is more beneficial for the community to craft new green parks around.
Another reason is that the community does not have a hospital around. Having a hospital in the town has tremendous significance, since the only hospital available for the locals is twenty five miles away. Therefore, in case of emergency situation, people have to drive far away to get help. If the residents have a medical facility next to them, they will be able to obtain medical care in the fast way as soon as they need. Moreover, it will decrease their expences on gas by do not driving to the neighboring city. Despite on availability of the mergency service, it is sometimes better to drive to the clinic by yourown. So, having the hospital in the community will improve peoples life.
To sum it up, I feel that building of the new high school in my community is unnecessary. This is because, people around have higher demand in green spaces and hospital. All things considered it is reasonable to assume that the government should found other constructions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79585798817 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67104714295 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1552162567 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.05 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162877873822 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521465931837 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609086994196 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117794195442 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737012035439 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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