What are the advantages and disadvantages of the movie theater that built-in near to your neighborhood? People express the diverse opinions on this. In my view, we have more advantages from the new movie theater because of the following reasons.
First, people actually benefited the from the movie theater by obtaining the job, although some people think that the movie theater increases the noise, criminal acts from the teenager. In fact, the criminality can be lessened by using the rule and regulation. For instance, let us take the example of my society, about twenty-five people obtained a good job from a theater. The theater did not damage our environment by making the rule that the theater must be closed within 9 p.m. and people did not enter by drinking the alcohol. In addition, our club earned the money from the tax on the theater’s profit and we spend that money on the development of our society. Thus, a theater helps our society and, people and must be made the new theater.
Next, we easily obtain the entertainment from the movie theater. The television is the alternative choice for the entertainment; however, we really entertain from the movie theater. This is because, we can see the new movies, the new shows from the theater which are impossible on a television. Moreover, the gathering of friends in a new movie theater is more beneficial than watching a television. For the illustration, I want to share my personal experience, most of the time I watched the new movie from the nearby theater. So, we gathered and thought that we are the happiest man because none one insulted and disturbed like watching the television in a home. Thus, the new movie theaters are entertaining and beneficial.
Finally, we can save the time and money from the nearby-new movie theater. When a famous movie is conducting in a movie theater, all people used to watch the movie. If the movie theater is far from our society, then we spend the more money in transportation as well as more time. We kill the time and money but from the nearby movie theater, we save the time and money. For example, my father has a shop and he always busies in that shop. However, when the Amitab’s film was running in the movie which was far from our house, he used to watch the film. As a result, our shop lost the income on that day. But, after making the nearby movie theater, my father sees the Amitab’s films without closing the shop. That’s why the new movie theater should be made nearby because it saves our time and money.
In conclusion, a new movie theater benefits our society as well as people by providing the job, entertainment and saves our time and money. The establishment of the new movie theaters does not have negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[3]
Message: Did you mean 'form'?
Suggestion: form
... First, people actually benefited the from the movie theater by obtaining the job,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79331941545 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70251630672 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425887265136 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6908451715 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.037037037 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7407407407 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183986501786 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748662287688 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506192175347 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134632248367 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033444232693 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.