Some people believe that coaches are the best teachers; however others, disagree with that statement. Personally, I agree that coaches are the best teachers. This is because coaches teach every aspects of the game, they fully concern towards our game and we can increase our capacity from their technique.
Firstly, coaches are the best teacher because they teach every aspect of game. They have much experience of the game. They are skilful like that best teachers. For example, I am a football player. I played football from childhood. In child age, my brother couches the every aspect of the game like that of other teacher in other sector. Today, I am a good player in football game because my brother couches me every aspect of the football game. My life is in football. I totally depend on football. Thus, my brother is a good teacher for me. Thus, Coaches are the best teachers.
Second, coaches fully concern towards our game. They are worried if we played bad in some matches and suggest about our game like a teacher suggest to any student. For example when I read in secondary level, then teacher suggested me about my life and mistake. They gave me many suggestion about my life. In that time, the coach in the football team also give the same suggestion in my football aspect. The coaches teaches me which method is the best method for your football carrier and this suggestion makes the good player like teachers suggestion makes the good student. Thus, coaches are the best teachers because they fully concern about our game.
Furthermore, we can increase our capacity by our coaches. The capacity is proportional to our coacher suggestion, performance. For example, when I studied higher level school, my previous coaches were the local player but in that time my coach was played in national level game. He was a national players. So, he had great skill and capacity for the football game. When he coaches me, then after two year I selected in Regional level than after three year I selected in national level competition. Thus, coaches can increase our capacity and they are the best teachers.
In summation, coaches are the best teachers. This is because coaches teach every aspects of the game, they fully concern towards our game and we can increase our capacity from their technique.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun suggestion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many suggestions'.
Suggestion: many suggestions
...about my life and mistake. They gave me many suggestion about my life. In that time, the coach ...
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Line 6, column 416, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'teach'.
Suggestion: teach
...tion in my football aspect. The coaches teaches me which method is the best method for ...
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Line 6, column 532, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...s suggestion makes the good player like teachers suggestion makes the good student. Thus...
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Line 8, column 298, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'player'?
Suggestion: player
... national level game. He was a national players. So, he had great skill and capacity fo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pacity and they are the best teachers. In summation, coaches are the best teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89340101523 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41202763179 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.370558375635 0.524837075471 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1204094103 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2666666667 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1333333333 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136622398649 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605956546668 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900746789528 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107687958748 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658716572503 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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