Is it better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of that group? People express different opinion on this. From my perspective, I disagree with that it is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group because of the following reasons.
First, the leader directs the people even though the direction may be wrong. The leader only survived when he/she way the certain way of direction but the member must support to the leader even he has some problem. For example, my father is a leader of an organization and he has the power to control the group members and directs them although they are unwilling to corroborate. The direction and powers, all are controlled by my fathers because he is the leader. Thus, being a leader is better than being a member of a group.
Next, the leader becomes famous than the member of any group. Being the members can only join the meeting of the group. However, when we become the leader we join the meeting of the other groups as well as the public. For instance, I am a leader of a club and I always attain the meeting of district club organization and people respect me for being the leader. In addition, I am a famous person all over the district because I effectively organize the club. Therefore, a leader is the better than the member of any group.
Further, the leader has the obligation to increase his skill and knowledge though he is excellent in all sectors. When a leader makes mistake, he has the full responsibility for that mistake and cannot control the people’s criticism. For example, I am a leader and at first, I did not have the skill of computer. I gave the all work of computer to a group member but one day he did a mistake. He wrongly typed the name of cooperative members. Many members criticized me about that action even I did not work. After that time, I learned the computer and that event provided the compulsion to learn the computer. Thus, skill can be increased by becoming the leader and to become the leader is better.
In conclusion, becoming the leader is better than becoming a member of a group due to the fact that a leader direct the people, he becomes famous and can enhance his skill and knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48768472906 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5557626334 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389162561576 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9679498708 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2173913043 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.652173913 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565414966895 0.236089414692 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220297338347 0.076458572812 288% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.248821297126 0.0737576698707 337% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.405224194075 0.150856017488 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194332938345 0.0645574589148 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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