It is important for everyone to know about what is happening all around the world even though the events have not affected our daily life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people think that knowing all the events that have no influence on their life is unnecessary. However, I think that it is important for everyone to know about what is happening all around the world . Therefore, I agree with the statement for 3 reasons.
First of all, although the events have not affected our daily life, health plays an important role for people, and knowing about what is happening all around the world can make people healthier. For example, even though SARS had disappeared for a long time, the related news can help people avoid infecting the kind of deadly disease again. To elaborate, the disease was coming from virus, so people could wash hands by alcohol frequently. As a result, people would not get sick more easily than before. Yet, if people never followed the news, people might be infected another diseases easily, even lost their life. Apparently, following every event all around the world is vital for our health.
Secondly, though the incidents have not had an influence on our life, people still focus on politics, and knowing the global thing can provide people with more political information. For instance, when I was a solider in Taiwanese military service, the officers usually putted their eyes on the war between Russia and Ukraine. To be more specific, the war had no impact on Taiwan, but the result of the war can bring some information about the political direction in China, such as its arrangement of army. Accidently, Taiwanese department of military can take action immediately to protect the country. Nonetheless, if the officers never watched global news, they might not think a good strategy to protect Taiwan without political information . Obviously, focusing on the global incidents can help people understand the politics.
Last but not least, despite the thing have not had an impact on our daily life, people still place emphasis on economy, and familiar with what happening all around the world can allow people to know more about economy. Take my father as an example, my father usually watched some news about the techonlogical companie, such as ASML, TSMC, and Micron. Furthermore, he can anticipate which company’s economy will rise by observing their operating situation, such as the selling amount of wafers. Consequently, he would know the possible economic direction in the future and take action on his business. Nevertheless, if my father never observed the changes between technological companies, he might not get some economic information, even make his business bankrupt. Hence, obtaining the econmic information though global news is essential for everyone.
In conclusion, knowing all the global events is important for everyone even though the incidents are uninfluenced on daily life. After all, people usually care about health, politics, and economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2395.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22925764192 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67521265695 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486899563319 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4327152748 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.130434783 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9130434783 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5652173913 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358869030012 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11520855611 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138365294059 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263293910877 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132241031648 0.0645574589148 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.