It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Throughout the years, people have been listening to the news either good or bad. They follow up news on newspaper, television, Internet and so forth and try to up to date. Some people hate to listen to bad news and try to preoccupy their mind with funny and positive news. On the other extreme of the rope, from some ordinary walk of life point of view, getting information even bad news is really necessary. From my vantage point, the latter attitude carries more weight. In the following paragraphs, I will explain why it is a noteworthy subject to know about bad news.
First and foremost, listening to the bad news maybe has a bad effect on our mood but we can have a good impression of the life of the other people who need our help. All countries are not in the same situation, some countries have awful and disastrous conditions which need to help other countries having good ones. Africa is one of the countries that people live in a very ruinous condition and they could not supply their daily subsistence. Numerous kids suffer from malnutrition. If we should not get access to this news, we cannot be informed about Africans status. Annually, many affluent people try to help kids living in Africa. To illustrate, King Jong, one of the wealthy Korean person, expends a lot of money to take care of children and build up schools and hospitals to improve the level of their lives. Hence, increasing the level of consciousness of people happens by listening to the unlikely news.
The second reason which springs to mind is obtaining information about the events, rules, and regulations of other countries. Some countries have restricted rules, especially for women. So, women via news could perceive rules of the other countries and compare with their country. Iranians women are not allowed to go abroad without their husbands’ consent. While, other countries get a right to women going everywhere they like, as an independent person. Besides, some countries do let girls below the range of 18 to get married. When these bad news share in the social media elevate the knowledge of people and some people launch campaign to protect girls and women from destructive rules. In addition, we are really required to know about events which happen in our country. Take my experience as an example. My cousin is a little a girl and she likes to play outside and go to the park near her flat. About two weeks ago, we found that a group of kidnaps come to our city. Police warn citizens to watch out their kids and go with their kids everywhere. It is unlikely news, but it is obligatory to know that.
In a nutshell, a meticulous look over the discussion and the main points reveals the fact that listen to unlikely news has some advantageous. First, it provides information about the condition of other countries. Not to mention that it augment knowledge of people about their right.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, look, may, really, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76693227092 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5716329094 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3892688699 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7666666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11550800233 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349252577645 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476910806663 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755517283118 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00652304171913 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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