It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Working is an inseparable part of our hectic life, which is occupied people's most precious time during a week. Some people argue to increase the daily time of work to have few days free, enjoying their leisure time and take more control on the half of the week. However, In my opinion, engaging in a job for five days a week for less time has some advantages than working three days a week full time. I subscribe to this idea for two main reasons that I represent upon hereunder.
To begin with, success in a job is one of the significant aspects of life so people make their best effort to have a proper performance at work to promote there. In other words, most of the workers want to thrive in their job to enjoy its benefits including salary increment, higher social position, and the happiness that is followed by them. With this in mind, I think that our physical capacity has limitations and some behaviors may decrease/decline/cutback our capability in doing well. Working hard in three days for a long time is a kind of this incorrect/faulty behavior that makes us exhausted. There is a rational relation between being fatigued and less creativity. It means that the more being tired the less concentration people have, as a result, people's creativity declines. So at the last hours, people just can do specific tasks as a live robot without any development or unique ideas. Therefore, people who work for a long time in a day do not have a chance to be prosperous and get a promotion.
Second, happiness is an emotional state specified by satisfaction and joy. In my perspective, people who work for five days with less time occupation increases their fortune to feel happier than a person who works hard for three days, since the first group has a diverse experience in a day like a short journey. These people commence/begin/start going to work in the morning and besides doing their responsibilities can have a pleasant/good time with co-workers and the boss or have chance to make new relationship for five days. After regular time of working, they have enough time to spend with friends, family, and children. These different/various kinds of relationships can balance their emotions and respond to all their emotional requirements in a day. Moreover, the short time on the way home and office help people to enjoy/relish fresh air. On the other hand, people who work for a long time in a day do not have time to enjoy being with family or they are so tired to have a good time with them. In addition, they should make the best effort in the office so cannot make a good/favorable relation with co-workers. All, the different advantages of working five days a week for a short time help us to keep our morale up and feel happiness.
To draw a conclusion grounded on the above statements, I believe that working for a regular time in five days has more advantages than working hard in three days. Since it helps us to feel happy and be prosperous in our office environment.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-04-11 | maryka72 | 60 | view |
| 2023-03-07 | Hibahtabbaa | 70 | view |
| 2023-02-27 | kevin1105 | 66 | view |
| 2023-02-26 | Hibahtabbaa | 60 | view |
| 2023-02-23 | can111 | 3 | view |
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 73
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job 70
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take part time job 73
- Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past 73
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 80
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k. However, In my opinion, engaging in a job for five days a week for less time h...
^^
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...vantages than working three days a week full time. I subscribe to this idea for two main ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1014, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to be prosperous and get a promotion. Second, happiness is an emotional state ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68631178707 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94286814175 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465779467681 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.626438187 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.173913043 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8695652174 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82608695652 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320180131134 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105510768416 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101507791892 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238517298902 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563173241914 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k. However, In my opinion, engaging in a job for five days a week for less time h...
^^
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...vantages than working three days a week full time. I subscribe to this idea for two main ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1014, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to be prosperous and get a promotion. Second, happiness is an emotional state ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68631178707 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94286814175 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465779467681 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.626438187 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.173913043 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8695652174 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82608695652 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320180131134 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105510768416 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101507791892 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238517298902 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563173241914 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.