It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
People think that it is better to have a job and work the whole week for only few hours every day. They think that work shorter day will allow them the opportunity to enjoy their time. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that working three days a week is better for me. The basis of my opinion is financial, social and personal.
From the financial perspective, working three days every week is a good chance to save more money. When people working three days each week, for longer shifts, they will drive their cars only three times weekly and consequently they will be able save the amount of gas they consume. People will have more money to enjoy their life. They work for full time and in the mean time they save money to more entertainments. Working three days every week is an amazing opportunity for many to save their money and enjoy their time.
Socially, working three days every week will allow employees to have better lives. When employees work only three days they will have the chance to enjoy their lives fairly. For example, employees will have the opportunity to spend more time with their families. They will be able to go for shopping, play with their children and even practice any sport.
Working three days every week will provides the employees the opportunity to increase their social net work and communicate easily with their friend. Employees now have the extra two days free, they can go for vacation or even trip with their friends.
The three days a week is much way beneficial than the five day a week, it allow more time for more fun
Personally, three days a week is the best schedule for me. As I am a mom I have three boys. They need a lot of attention and care. Working only three days every week will help me to provide them with my care. It is better for my children to be with me than staying in daycare or with a baby sitter. I can teach my kid more important thing in their lives than the daycare I could also pass on value to my kids. Working three day every week is important and beneficial for all the moms around the world, it will not only help moms to take care of their children but also will allow moms to be more successful in their work.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mention above, I encourage all the people to work three days their children and the career they working on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l allow employees to have better lives. When employees work only three days they wil...
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...rip with their friends. The three days a week is much way beneficial than the f...
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...people to work three days their children and the career they working on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47597254005 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21335294071 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379862700229 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7573604919 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2083333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414268995726 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165433065584 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106617095711 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276344915796 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682931640896 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.