It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Nowadays, societies progress with unbelievable velocity; so, emigration and separation among people are unavoidable. however, Everyone whether or not engages in some area to achieve facilities and money, time is an important thing for everyone to achieve these goals; on the other hand, societies are filled with unknown dangers or threats; thus, everyone needs friends to be safe from these threats.To Help of friends can take advice or give morale and also announce about dangers, etc. Furthermore, humans inherently were created in social form; so, without others people living impossible for his.
First, cognition of people is difficult; on the other hand, findings of new friend need to spend time; so, if a person without suitable investigation selects a friend, this choice will not proper. Societies have been filling from wolfish people that want to abuse unsophisticated people, if a person makes mistake in the evaluation, he/she will capture with these people.
Second, some friends are inspiration of progress that they want to help her friends to solve her problems or be progressed without jealousy, this event happen in close relation; while, if a person chooses new friend, it will impossible to request help at the first time; on the other hand, jealousy increase among new friends because relation is not close or strong.
Another worthwhile noting point is new communication methods that make easy to communicate. Everyone in everywhere can easily travel to other place and meet with friends or with social network keep in touch with friends. Nowadays relations summarize in social network and friend at any time connect together without spending money or time.
All in all, these reasons clearly show the importance of old friends preservation. In my opinion, finding new friends with close relationships are difficult; so, maintain of old friends is very important
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...eparation among people are unavoidable. however, Everyone whether or not engages in som...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ople are unavoidable. however, Everyone whether or not engages in some area to achieve facilit...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...s friends to be safe from these threats.To Help of friends can take advice or give...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32775919732 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72417008871 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3223741383 48.9658058833 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.818181818 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227668475542 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091640186645 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699838719088 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140812474871 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733042806376 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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