In this hectic world, people and companies are searching for practical ways to do so many activities in less time with high accuracy. It is ideal for everyone to be capable of doing all his responsibilities well in daily life. Some people think that do works slowly is more beneficial because it is avoiding making mistakes, but I believe that because of a large number of activities in our busy lives which we should do, it is not a suitable method. I will explore my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, by this vast amount of work that humans have to do these days, there is no way to tackle them except increase speed. Doing tasks more quickly has some issues. It causes some unconscious mistakes because of high speed. But it is not a big problem because by doing works on time even faster, it is plausible to review our activities and correct the issues. For instance, when I was a student in high school. Every day, I finished my homework very soon and revised it if it had some falseness. In contrast, my brother studies his lessons slowly. So he always had the stress would be able to complete them or not. As a result, he not only could not finish his tasks entirely but also got fewer scores than me.
Second, if people can overcome their works and their lots of tasks sooner, they will have extra time to dedicate it to their interesting activities. It has many positive effects on their lives and gives them a lot of energy to continue their work with high motivation. In comparison, we can see some people who do not finish their office tasks and continue the rest of them at home. It can be harmful to themselves and their family because their works do not let them spend more time with each other.
In conclusion, it is more convenient to do our works faster instead of doing them so slowly. Even, we make some mistakes. Because by finishing tasks at high speed, we have more time to go over them and solve their unaware errors. Besides, we have more time to assign to our family and having fun.
- tpo 49 80
- some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade they get 60
- it is impossible to live in Venus surface permanent 73
- to success in future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school 75
- Because the world is changing so quickly people are less happy and less satisfy 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mistakes, but I believe that because of a large number of activities in our busy lives which we s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49322493225 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40585698959 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.114004029 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9523809524 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154670603812 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481426600889 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048422871352 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992706239607 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178042213796 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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