Because the world is changing so quickly people are less happy and less satisfy
In this hectic world, everything is changing so rapidly. As a result, people have to fit themselves with these massive and quick changes to provide a steady life. Some people believe that these myriads of changes make people happier, but I think it makes people’s life harder and less happy. I will explore my point of view in the following paragraphs.
First, as the world becomes more sophisticated and complex because of the changes, people have to try more to coordinate their lives with the changes. These days, individuals make a lot of efforts to fit themselves with developments. They should spend a great deal of time following these changes. So they have no time to dedicate to their families and the things that make their lives more satisfactory. In other words, they ignore the aspects of life which provide some benefits to make their lives happier.
Second, by big changes that are happening these days and their effects on people’s lives, humans will choose more challenging and more impossible aims for the future. Having inaccessible wishes because of the adverse effects of rapid changes makes people less satisfied. By putting out-of-the-way purposes and failing to reach them, people are more anxious and feel sadder because seekers rarely can achieve their unsubstantial goals. For instance, I always put some far aims for my life because significant changes are happening around me rapidly. In other words, when I find my office is getting more advanced, I put some unrealistic aims to equip me for my working environment changes, but after some time that I cannot reach them, I feel depressed and unsatisfied.
In conclusion, with significant changes that are taking place every day globally, people’s lives are getting harder and harder. So this issue makes it less plausible for people to feel comfortable and happy because they do not have enough time to dedicate to have fun and resting. Also, by the harmful effects of fast changes, people become more perfectionist and put impossible aims for themselves, which by losing those aims, they feel weak and unsuccessful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them, I feel depressed and unsatisfied. In conclusion, with significant changes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08959537572 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70167529821 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494219653179 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9520027611 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.588235294 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258301286131 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908703340446 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902293127768 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179370972721 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885203340692 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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