It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today
There can be no doubt that nowadays, challenging for achievement to success play a key role in peoples’ lives. No one can deny the direct and indirect effect of efforts for becoming flourish on our private lives. During history humans were always attempting to get superior to others, and in this way they endured numerous adversity in that way. Nowadays, may hold the opinion that it was easier to achieve success in the past, However others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that nowadays it is easier to become successful. From my vantage point of view, the second belief is true. In the following paragraphs I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
As the first reason, I want to point out something which is widely accepted. It is now impossible to neglect the effect of state-of-the-art technology on achievement prosperity. Throughout history with advancement of technology exuberant device and tools have been invented which have paved the way of getting to success. For the purpose of illustration, the invention of television set, computer, cell-phones, etc. in this way and with this apparatuses people can get numerous information and access to abundant sources. As a case in point, by searching on the internet they can find in great supply e-books, papers, informative videos, etc. Under this circumstance people will have no problem for addressing direct and proper way of achieving success. In addition to that, experiments carried out in both developed and undeveloped countries vividly show, that the number of ground-breaking people are going to increase with advancement of technology. Since innovation is an important key to become successful, this matter can confirm the aforementioned points. Therefore, we can see how important this factor truly is.
The second exquisite point to be mentioned is that during times by growing population, the number of competitors for reaching to success have increased, this matter play a very important role because this intense rivalry can stimulate people to push back the frontiers of success more and more. As a case in point, in my country the number of people who participate in the university entrance exam are going to increase every year at a galloping rate. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent social research conducted in my country show that from 1900 to 2015 the percentage of this competition have escalated at a startling rate.
Therefore, as the aforementioned points cited, from the earliest days to today the rate of increasing rivalry among people are going to grow. It is higher compared to the past. As you can understand, it is highly anticipated not only by me but also by scientists that competitors in different positions are going to increase over time.
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- Television advertising directed towards young children (aged 2 to 5) should not be allowed. 73
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Children should only study or play and don t have to do household chores 80
- It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today 45
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2326.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16888888889 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99099554011 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3902613068 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.727272727 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147354149495 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403104630768 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721566362173 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898276457033 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610080174196 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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