Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I am totally agree with the above statement, because of many reasons. The first reason I want to mention is the improvement of science. Second reason is the situation dominating our country. Last reason is human being aim to live convenient.
Science improvement always has been in an increasing manner, which leads the human life through convenience. For example, when our grandparents were children, the level of medicine and healthcare was far away from the level that is today. If one got an illness maybe that was an unknown illness, and might even die because of that, but today thanks to the improvements made in this field, almost every illness has a solution or at least has been recognized, and there are available suggestions to avoid each kind of sickness.
The condition dominating our country, affects the way we live. When our grandparents were children, our country was in a bad condition, there was war between the dominant government and the Great Britain, each of the sides aiming to take control of our country. Our grandparents had to do something, to avoid our country's government from being dropped by external forces. Comparing to that time, in which everyone had to fight to be free, we are more comfortable having opportunity to study instead of being forced to fight.
Human being aim to be convenient and live comfortably. To acquire this target, human is required to to take advantage of his mind, and think about new things that brings convenience to his/her life. As mentioned earlier science has been in an improving manner, means that the level of knowledge today is designed to make today life more convenient than the time our grandparents were children.For example, vehicle appliances used today like bicycle, motorcycle, car, bus, and airplane have made travelling easier than it was when our grandparents were children. Mobile is the device used to communicate with people who are far from us, without having to be physically near to them, as it was when our grandparents were children.
The way we live today makes our life easier than the way our grandparents lived. That is because of the improvement of human knowledge, the condition dominating the country and the aim of living convenient.
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I am totally agree with the above statement, because of many reasons. The first reason I want to mention is the improvement of science. Second reason is the situation dominating our country. Last reason is human being aim to live convenient.
Science improvement always has been in an increasing manner, which leads the human life through convenience. For example, when our grandparents were children, the level of medicine and healthcare was far away from the level that is today. If one got an illness maybe that was an unknown illness, and might even die because of that, but today thanks to the improvements made in this field, almost every illness has a solution or at least has been recognized, and there are available suggestions to avoid each kind of sickness.
The condition dominating our country, affects the way we live. When our grandparents were children, our country was in a bad condition, there was war between the dominant government and the Great Britain, each of the sides aiming to take control of our country. Our grandparents had to do something, to avoid our country's government from being dropped by external forces. Comparing to that time, in which everyone had to fight to be free, we are more comfortable having opportunity to study instead of being forced to fight.
Human being aim to be convenient and live comfortably. To acquire this target, human is required to to take advantage of his mind, and think about new things that brings convenience to his/her life. As mentioned earlier science has been in an improving manner, means that the level of knowledge today is designed to make today life more convenient than the time our grandparents were children.For example, vehicle appliances used today like bicycle, motorcycle, car, bus, and airplane have made travelling easier than it was when our grandparents were children. Mobile is the device used to communicate with people who are far from us, without having to be physically near to them, as it was when our grandparents were children.
The way we live today makes our life easier than the way our grandparents lived. That is because of the improvement of human knowledge, the condition dominating the country and the aim of living convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...randparents were children. I am totally agree with the above statement, because of ma...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an increasing manner" with adverb for "increasing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Science improvement always has been in an increasing manner, which leads the human life through con...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... acquire this target, human is required to to take advantage of his mind, and think a...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...the time our grandparents were children.For example, vehicle appliances used today ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, at least, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 15.1003584229 232% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0206185567 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81098501077 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489690721649 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.7264331569 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465421482486 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158676889715 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14137024459 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304113190333 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244256513034 0.0645574589148 378% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.