Human always looks for a calm life. If we compare our time with the past, we can find out how the condition of life has changed. Today, I think in most aspects of the life we can find calm in comparison to the past. I can mention the technology and education as 2 main criteria of my opinion.
With a little study about the technology of our grandparent's time and compare that technology with the present time, we would be able to see the amount of the improvement. For example, my grandparents had to stay in a line for a long time to do their works in the banks. Nowadays, we are able to carry out the most of our bank works in our houses just by some clicks in our laptops. We can find the considerable difference between the way that our grandparents buy something and the way which we shop, too. By reduction the time of doing our work in these days, we can experience more welfare in our life.
People in the past didn't pay attention a lot to the education. Being an uneducated moves a person to do some hard work. As an example, my grandparents worked on the farm 10 hours a day. If the parents of my grandparents didn't force their children to continue their education, they would be able to choose a better job for themselves. Today, there are a lot of jobs which are done more easily and with the same amount of income (with regard the value of that money) in comparison to the past due to the gaining knowledge of that job.
To sum up, we can find out that our life is easier than the life of our grandparents when they were children. We mentioned 2 criteria of a calm life that played the key roles. Although we could prove our easier life, it is hard to prove in which time the people feel happy spiritually!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...elfare in our life. People in the past didnt pay attention a lot to the education. B...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'move'?
Suggestion: move
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27217125382 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49582880145 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474006116208 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7120022601 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1764705882 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171915527213 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609401288382 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769819798082 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119751453491 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788871750621 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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