Life is today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children.
Grandparents are always against current ways of living. If someone talks to them, definitely they would say that past was better. Nonetheless, I completely agree that life today is easier and more comfortable than what our ancestors experienced. I believe this way because of two main reasons that I am going to explore in the following essay.
Firstly, thechnologهes have removed most of the barriers in the life. In the past, if someone wanted to talk with one of his relatives, he ought to travel a long distance to meet them. However, today because of internet, social media and smartphones just in a second we can call them or even see them via apps like Skype. Even for a face to face communication, thanks to the airplanes and fast trains, a route that got 10 hours to travel, now takes almost 1 hour.
Secondly, nowadays it is more convenient to make money. Because of economic development in the word people now make more money than our grandparent era. Moreover, this developments in different facets of life, almost abolish myriads arduous jobs like farming. Although farming is still prevalent in the world but most of it's tasks are handling by machine. furthermore, in the past, there were limited jobs in the world that our grandparents could choose it for the living, but currently, there are various jobs that we can select for our career. As a personal example, my grandfather's job is farming. When I ask him what features in this profession convinced you to choose it, he says that nothing, I don’t have many choices. He is from a rural city and there weren't distinction jobs, therefore he chose it because he was obliged to.
In a nutshell, I think that life today is easier than what our grandparents experienced.
- tpo 11 85
- Nowadays many movies or films are based on books Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book Which one do you prefer 90
- T P O 53 3
- Some people prefer doing sports on their own, such as running, while others like to do sports in groups. Which one do you prefer? 73
- agree or disagree. It is not necessary to have access to the Internet to live a full life 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83666666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.790322562 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5303637508 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236267673537 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698579193444 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093659303048 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172418979767 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998946679575 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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