Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Life is changing at an alarming pace due to various technological advancements influencing every aspect of our life. Life Sixty years before was very different than life today and life sixty years ahead is beyond today's imagination. Such a tremndous progress in every aspect is virtue of combined effort of researchers, engineers, politicians, doctors and all the other occupations. I am very well convinced with the statement that Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children which i attribute to technology, health care and education sectors.
First adressing technology, I consider it as a major influential factor responsible for changing lifestyles. In our grandparents era all the daily chores had to be done mannually starting from washing the dishes, laundry, heating and cooking the food to walking miles of distance for work or buying household items. At maximum they had access to bicycles for their comfort. All of their work was physically straining hence were left with almost no leisure time or time for themselves in which they could pursue their hobbies. In contrast, now a days all of the daily chores have become automated by introduction of dishwashers, washing machines, microwave ovens, induction cookers and going out is limited only by our ability to drive ie we can drive to every corner of the mainland even be it thousands of miles apart. All this has made lives relaxing and comfortable and reduced the human physical exertion hence creating a lot of leisure time to work on our hobbies.
The second major revolution is improvemnt in health care systems and progress made medicine has not only helped to cure many of then believed uncurable diseases but also increase the life expectancy rates. Earlier there was no vaccine availible for Polio, Tuberculosis and many people suffered polio since their childhood and many died because of Tuberculosis because of lack of avalibilty of vaccines. US president Roosevelt could not walk because he was suffering from polio but now most of the countries of the world are polio free. In addtion to this now a days even organ transplants are availible and most of the diseases are curable which was not possible 60 years before.
Even in the Education sector much progress has been noted. There was a time when going to school was only afforded by elite or royal class in India, but at present every single child under the age of 15 is enrolled in primary, secondary or high school and gaining education. Increase in acedemic qualification increases the job opportunities and a constant source of income making lives much more comfortable than it was earlier.
Therefore considering the Health care, Technology, Education as major influencing factors to make lives comfortable and much more easier than when our grandparents were children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... pursue their hobbies. In contrast, now a days all of the daily chores have become aut...
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...orld are polio free. In addtion to this now a days even organ transplants are availible an...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ore comfortable than it was earlier. Therefore considering the Health care, Technology...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13704496788 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81517240626 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537473233405 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6009422772 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.277777778 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9444444444 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348373274201 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098593849574 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143552112326 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212427464368 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158827388249 0.0645574589148 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.