Read and think about the following statement:
Pets should be treated like family members.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
A family is a group of people whom we can always count on in our toughest times, Love and understand each other and live with harmony. Pets are the domesticated animals who make a part of our life and love with us like our family. In my opinion, Pets should be treated like family members due to the fact that pets contribute to a lot of happiness in our life.
Pets are very faithful and can be trusted upon and they never go against their master's will. My friend Rohit had a dog whom he loved a log and the dog was always faithful to him. During his bad times, he had to lose everything in his life, his property, girlfriend and even he left the dog because he did not have enough money to take his care. The dog was very loyal and faithful to him and every day brought his master food from different sources, helped him to establish himself and get back to normal life again.
Pets have feelings similar to human beings which they express through their play, and gestures to their master. They are always protective towards their master and entertain them by playing with them in different possible ways which I personally experienced when I and my cat Squeaky used to play with the ball, run after one another, used to lick my face whenever I patted her. She used to entertain me and help me forget all my worries and relieve all the day's stress so that I can rejuvenate myself every day.
Pets help all the members of the family in different ways. For instance, My girlfriend had a dog in her house who was a labrador. He seemed very ferocious and was hyperactive. He used to guard their house every night and one day there was a burglar near their house and he barked so loudly that everyone woke up and called the cops and they caught the burglar. He even helped her mother in daily chores like helping in watering the plants by carrying buckets of water in his mouth, used to go out with her mother and frighten everyone else on street to protect her mother. Every day morning he used to wake my girlfriend up to take her to morning walk which helped her health to improve.
Since Pets are always faithful, protective towards their family, help every person in the family to stay happy by entertaining and alleviating stress, even help in daily chores and try to maintain the family harmony, therefore pets deserve to be treated like a family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d the cops and they caught the burglar. He even helped her mother in daily chores ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45958429561 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28745862725 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4896073903 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3555220474 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.588235294 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103529404492 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430173289186 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588999711122 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767201070154 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617148496737 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.