Read and think about the following statement:
Pets should be treated like family members.
do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Humans are the most intellectually evolved animals on earth. They tend to live in colonies and take care of one another. There is a conception in the society that other animals tend to be selfish to survive. In my opinion it is a misconception, and therefore, pets should be treated as family members.
First, pets are loyal and provide unconditional love to their owner. Animals develop intense affection towards humans as well as other animals that extend their care towards them during their most formative years. Like kids love their parents and look up to them, in the same way pets love their master. Therefore, by not treating them like a family member is unfair to them.
Another reason is that people spend ample amount of money on pet care. There is almost 50 percent of the population that adopt pets. In a survey done in the United States of America a family spends almost 30,000 dollars on pets per year. This is almost equivalent to college education of a human child. Therefore, not treating them as family member would be waste of time and resource.
Finally, pets act as therapeutic animals for humans. Many who suffer from anxiety disorder and other stress associated medical conditions are advised to have pets for their wellbeing. Pets detect distress easily and provide comfort to the person. Pets act as more reliable and trustworthy emotional support for humans and therefore, they should be treated with similar care and respect as a family member.
In nature animals adopt other species as their own and act as a guardian to the younger ones of the other species. Nature teaches us to live in peace and harmony. Humans should treat their pets as family member as they provide them respect and unconditional love the qualities that in present day is lagging in many human families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88996763754 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48702080059 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1921866328 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.55 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174040392069 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585110068117 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705440939574 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105926233472 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361518242014 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.