Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.?
Life include variety aspects and your perspective to which aspect give you different answer. Upbeat people may more likely to say the life is better today, on the contrary other people disagree with them. The debate follows on some confliction which give you the sense that maybe both of them have right.
As I mentioned in my first sentence, I reject that idea and I defend my opinion with two reason in following paragraph.
The most important reason is life condition which is changing continuously in a manner that something gonna better and others gonna worse. For example, in past my grandfather was employed by bachelor degree in oil industry with high salary, also, it should be noted that he was young and has no stand but today albeit I have master degree, I must send resume by email to diverse company and have different review with many people to get employed and when I ask about my salary they say you are amateurish and your salary will be a little at begin.
The second equally important point is about peace and safety. Three decades ago, many countries had different condition, for instance my country was in war with Eraq and many of our people were killed. In that situation, education had not good quality and many fassillate that today exit did not being. Today, we are in peace with eraq and our children can educate easeily and they do not worry about their daddies which took part in war. As I said before, people who see life from this perspective more likely to say life is easier now.
To wrap it up, It will be exceedingly hard to say life is easier and more comfortable today. Allegedly every decades have their difficulties and it is your to enjoy of it or nagging over and over and did not acquire your right of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...art in war. As I said before, people who see life from this perspective more like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59554140127 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34400313216 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4598880432 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249309331051 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812726376854 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719123881022 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126236525731 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823315910818 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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