Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
The world is changing everyday. There have been lot of changes and inventions compared to 60-70 years ago. I completely agree with the statement that life has changed greatly compared to 4 decades ago and life today is much easier. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in the below essay.
The first most important thing is transportation .Earlier there was very less transportation and it was very difficult to travel to one place to another. I remember my grandfather saying how he had to walk miles to get to the bus stand and there would be just one bus to the destination and if he missed that he would have to walk back home and come back the next day. Today we have a bus stand every one km or so and there is a large frequency of buses to any destination.
The second point is technology. Internet is booming now and the invention of internet has made people get things at ease. With online shopping people can buy grocery and other important things without going to the store. Everything comes to your house with the click of a button. By this we can save time and spend that time in doing somethings that's more significant. Also now its easier to communicate with our friends and relatives who stay abroad through messages and video calls. It's as close as being with them as opposed to few years back where people had to wait for years to get a letter from their relative who stays abroad.
Technology has made drastic improvements in the medical field as well. Earlier there were very few hospitals. Getting to the hospital itself was very difficult and it used to talk a long time to diagnose the issue. Today we have advanced methods for treating any issues and we have a large number of hospitals. Diseases like cancer which had no cure earlier can now be cured of its found out a particular stage. Even if a new disease comes the doctors are able to diagnose and find a treatment for it soon.
In summary, I feel that life today is much easier and much more comfortable that our grandparents age. This has only been possible due to the technological improvements in the areas of medical, transport and social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
The world is changing everyday. There have been lot of changes and inv...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t most important thing is transportation .Earlier there was very less transportati...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Earlier
...most important thing is transportation .Earlier there was very less transportation and ...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...and spend that time in doing somethings thats more significant. Also now its easier t...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...oing somethings thats more significant. Also now its easier to communicate with our ...
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Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... as close as being with them as opposed to few years back where people had to wait...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ods for treating any issues and we have a large number of hospitals. Diseases like cancer which h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, i feel, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55526992288 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52046559385 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547557840617 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9563615781 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6818181818 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151024758839 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395336621258 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702449172361 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884937192983 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063425306766 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.