In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
Automobiles are one of the greatest inventions that has happened in the recent times. The invention of cars has certainly been a boon and has many advantages. I agree with the statement that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today. I will explain the reason in the following essay.
Firstly, the use of cars has resulted in traffic jams.An individual takes a lot of time in travelling and there is a lot of pressure while driving as well, as he is not sure if he will reach the desired place in the correct time. This has been a reason for air pollution which also results in global warming.Instead if he uses a public transport he will be able to travel without any stress. Also by using a metro or train he will be able to reach the place faster. Due to pollution a lot of people are falling sick.In order to protect the environment and to avoid traffic it is better to use less automobiles and use of more public transportation. Also travelling in a public transport is more safe than travelling in car.
Another reason is the money involved. Money is a very important factor and the cost involved in buying a car is certainly not less. The more features added to a car, the more expensive it is. A person buys costly cars after which he needs to fill petrol every week. The cost involved is very high when compared to the public transport where he can reach the same place with less amount of money and less amount of stress.
In summary, I feel that in the future there will be fewer automobiles. This is because buying a car is very expensive and usage of more cars causes traffic jams and pollution.Thus I feel that in the future people will give more importance to public transport that cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, while, i feel, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47784810127 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55670156275 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462025316456 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7348203818 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351174775323 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126095386903 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178478304764 0.0737576698707 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231528631046 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154043827909 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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