life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children.
The statement posits that, our life is more easier today than the life of our grandparents, when they were at the age of our's, they were in much hardship and struggle than we today have to face. Initially, that type of statement may seem indefensible and some may claim that, we are facing much hardship because today the world is more complex compared to before, or it is the same for all generations. However, in my view, it is a perfect statement and I agree with the statement to the fullest. Below, I will discuss the reasons of my stance.
The first reason of my claim is that, today we people enjoy a lot of facilities, which was not available in the past. For example, we are having AC in our bedroom, most of the time we are having our personal room from a very little age which was not possible to think in most of the families before because of combined family structure of our grandparents. I am talking about the socio-economic situation of Bangladesh where I actually live in. In a developed country like USA, situation can possibly be different.
In our country, we heard the stories of the struggle of our grandparents and their fighting against all odds. Today, we go to school at walking distance from our home, whereas, our grandparents used to travel about 10 km for their schools. Again, there were not the roads and highways where we travel by bus or cars. They used to walk and sometimes had to swim to get schooling. There was not pen and paper like today. My grandfather told me that, they used to write on the leaf of banana tree with a stick of bamboo using some ink. So, if we compare, we can see the clear distinction between our life and facilities and the situations through which the had to survive.
Similarly, there were a very little developed infrastructure compared to today. There were no current at our village, at night they used to study in the light of moon. There was not any natural gas like today to cook food, there was no you tube, google, wiki to search or view something important. We people today use smartphone and can call our relatives within a moment, whereas, our grandparents used to write letters to their relatives and it sometimes took few month to get a reply. There was no AC to cool them down in the hot mid summer, they used to live in tin shed house and always were afraid of flood in the monsoon time.
So, form the above comparison, we can see that, it is not reasonable to compare the facilities we get today with our grandparents. That is why, I think we all should agree that, life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
The statement posits that, our life is more easier today than the life of our grandparents...
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Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...a developed country like USA, situation can possibly be different. In our country, we heard...
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Line 4, column 462, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
...o their relatives and it sometimes took few month to get a reply. There was no AC to cool...
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Line 4, column 607, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[1]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'floods'.
Suggestion: floods
...in shed house and always were afraid of flood in the monsoon time. So, form the abov...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'whereas', 'for example', 'i think', 'talking about', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208178438662 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.161710037175 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0613382899628 0.0866891130778 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408921933086 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102230483271 0.0685040099705 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124535315985 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0223048327138 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57523999484 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390334572491 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00185873605948 0.00188951952338 98% => OK
Determiners: 0.0799256505576 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148698884758 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148698884758 0.0139019557991 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2636.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 481.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48024948025 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.251559251559 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191268191268 0.251872472559 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143451143451 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0893970893971 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57523999484 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469854469854 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.524667523 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8636363636 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2563844038 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8636363636 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 40.9904554905 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.16463414634 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215095181809 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111578084205 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0737686356036 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529246427516 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157261936815 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904382148724 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11806583958 0.0781384742642 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.376614528194 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106750752768 0.067059652881 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172785769021 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12053123936 0.0618886996521 195% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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