There are many factors involve while choosing a good friend. Loyalty is at the top all of them. It is the basic building block to strengthen any relationship. This essay will shed light on specific reasons.
To begin with, after family the most close relationship is friendship with someone. The only personalty, which could affect our life in both way and this will depends upon our choosing method. Many of us see wealth,other see how talented the person is, But according to me, creating a bonding with someone before knowing to what extent he his honest is most crucial factor. I can say it confidently because of my experience. When i started my higher education out of my city in a central university. I took university hostel and my room mate was from another city we met each other for the first time. so was less time to know each other because of different classes schedule and i blindly trusted him. consequently, he stole my money. When hostel warden decided to took action against nearby rooms students including my room mate. I said to exclude my room mate out of this matter by saying i know he is honest. After few month, I caught him with the same money. This incident change my perspective not to trust everyone.
Moreover, having loyalty in a relationship strengthen the relation. In this modern world having friend along with family is necessary. A true friend always help us at every step of life. In this busy life if you have true relation that mean you are wealthy. we can share our personal life and can get a good advice without being selfish. this will of course reduce your stress when you feel low in your life. To exemplify, i have friend since from secondary school . She help me alot whenever things go wrong.
In conclusion, loyalty play most important role while making a friend because it could affact our life which of course can resistance our career as well as mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, of course, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68639053254 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49977679323 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6952433806 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.36 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.52 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154581559623 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390869004267 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584266308145 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120193839075 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064520959162 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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