The majority of people travel for different reasons and their decision is influenced by the purpose of the travel. Some people believe that traveling domestically is easier and more convenient than traveling to foreign countries. While others argue that traveling to foreign countries is more interesting. Personally, I think that traveling to foreign countries is more interesting and exciting.
One of the reasons why it’s better to travel overseas is because we get to learn new things that could benefit us more. If we go to another place that is different from our own, It would give us more pleasure because we are exploring something that is unfamiliar to us. Even though, traveling to places which are full of adventure and really exciting, it’s very expensive. For example, I remember my cousin took a trip overseas after he saved some money, but he never thought that the amount that he spend was going to be double the amount that he saved.
Because of that, traveling overseas is well-worth it despite the cost.
The other reason is because going to foreign countries gives people an opportunity to look for a new job and place to live. If people find what they think is better for them in another country than in their own, they might prefer to move there without any hesitation. For instance, I came to the United States because I had a job opportunity which I liked a lot. So that made me to decide to move overseas.
That's why, the opportunities that people find in foreign places could benefit them more.
Summing up, I believe that traveling to foreign countries would give people more alternatives and opportunities to explore rather than just traveling locally. Meanwhile it is more interesting because people could learn more about things and cultures that they didn't know before.
The majority of people travel for different reasons and their decision is influenced by the purpose of the travel. Some people believe that traveling domestically is easier and more convenient than traveling to foreign countries. While others argue that traveling to foreign countries is more interesting. Personally, I think that traveling to foreign countries is more interesting and exciting.
One of the reasons why it’s better to travel overseas is because we get to learn new things that could benefit us more. If we go to another place that is different from our own, It would give us more pleasure because we are exploring something that is unfamiliar to us. Even though, traveling to places which are full of adventure and really exciting, it’s very expensive. For example, I remember my cousin took a trip overseas after he saved some money, but he never thought that the amount that he spend was going to be double the amount that he saved.
Because of that, traveling overseas is well-worth it despite the cost.
The other reason is because going to foreign countries gives people an opportunity to look for a new job and place to live. If people find what they think is better for them in another country than in their own, they might prefer to move there without any hesitation. For instance, I came to the United States because I had a job opportunity which I liked a lot. So that made me to decide to move overseas.
That's why, the opportunities that people find in foreign places could benefit them more.
Summing up, I believe that traveling to foreign countries would give people more alternatives and opportunities to explore rather than just traveling locally. Meanwhile it is more interesting because people could learn more about things and cultures that they didn't know before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99016393443 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65457574257 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501639344262 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3399821637 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.520512360611 0.236089414692 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201006231604 0.076458572812 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215005374626 0.0737576698707 292% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273021271452 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.265567872409 0.0645574589148 411% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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